Equilibrium ([info]equil_ibrium) wrote,
@ 2006-12-08 22:23:00
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Their mutterings turned into disbelieving shouts and cries of outrage, spreading through the Great Hall like a particularly poisonous game of Chinese Whispers.

“They‘ve all joined his side…,” Harry overheard a third year saying, and he turned to stare at Hermione and Ron in horror.


Hermione shook her head, and then scanned the rafters for her owl as hundreds of birds flew down like Spitfires, conducting a synchronised airborne dance.

As soon as her copy of The Daily Prophet had been dropped in front of her, Hermione snatched it up, unwrapping it with shaky hands, and smoothed it down on the table top.

As she read, her face aged visibly, and she nodded, her lips pressed together, before pushing the paper over towards Harry.

‘…The Ministry lost control of the last of the Dementors as they left Azkaban and joined the forces of the Dark Lord. It has been reported that the number of Dementors known to exist in the British Isles has doubled in the last three months. This comes a little after news that the giants and werewolves have also chosen to join his side…’

Harry swallowed and lifted his head, catching Ron trying to offer silent support to Hermione, his hand on her shoulder.

He sucked in a breath, and looked away again, turning automatically to face the top table.

Dumbledore sat in the middle, his expression grim, and he tilted his head, meeting Harry’s gaze, studying him for a long, soul-stripping moment, before giving him a nod.

Harry blinked, ignoring the hopeful stares of the students seated around him, each of them offering him their desperate trust, each of them choosing to believe that if they followed him he would give them what they wanted.

Harry sat a little straighter, pushing his glasses up his nose. Those people were his peers, and he had grown up with them. Even the ones he didn’t like too much deserved to have the chance to live and to thrive.

He watched as groups of girls huddled together like gossiping old washer-women, congregating for support. Boys exchanged wary looks, knowing that it was almost time to put aside whatever childish grudges they held in favour of fighting to protect the people they loved, and their school.

Harry stood up without even realising it, and picked his wand up from the table where he’d dropped it next to his knife and fork. All eyes turned expectantly towards him, the chatter dissolving into the walls.

He pushed a hand through his hair, messing it further, pocketed his wand, and then pulled the sleeves of his oversized sweatshirt down over his hands.

“I’m ready,” he said, not even bothering to cast a sonorous on his voice - they could have heard if he’d whispered. “I’m going to do it.”

The castle and its occupants gave him a collective, albeit reluctant sigh of relief, and in return, he offered his friends a smile.



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[info]majaji
2006-12-08 10:52 pm UTC (link)
oh wow... it brought tears to my eyes. Didn't help the fact that I'm listening to a song called "I believe in you" while I read this. lol.

"Boys exchanged wary looks, knowing that it was almost time to put aside whatever childish grudges they held in favour of fighting to protect the people they loved, and their school."

Favorite part.

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[info]kissed_by_fate
2006-12-08 11:56 pm UTC (link)
Harry blinked, ignoring the hopeful stares of the students seated around him, each of them offering him their desperate trust, each of them choosing to believe that if they followed him he would give them what they wanted.

I believe.

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[info]smallwriting
2006-12-09 12:04 am UTC (link)
Oh wow. I like this version of Harry. Normally one sees him as annoyed or tired of his role and taking it up because he just has to. Here it shows how he realizes that he does need to take up said role. Bravo, job well done again.

Can't wait for tomorrow.

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[info]parlemer
2006-12-09 01:00 am UTC (link)
Dumbledore sat in the middle, his expression grim, and he tilted his head, meeting Harry’s gaze, studying him for a long, soul-stripping moment, before giving him a nod.

That gave me chills. I love Harry's acceptance of his responsibility. Emo-Harry gets a bit annoying after a while. Looking forward to the big reveal tomorrow!! :)

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[info]jennashaped
2006-12-09 01:03 am UTC (link)
this is excellent. i'm really looking forward to the release!!

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[info]emerald_scully
2006-12-09 02:47 am UTC (link)
I love Harry taking his responsibility!
Can't wait!

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[info]charliemc
2006-12-09 03:05 am UTC (link)
Beautifully written!

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[info]empress_jae
2006-12-09 05:10 am UTC (link)
i've waited till the day before to say something....

this is absolutely AMAZING. oh my god...

wow.

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[info]paganmaid
2006-12-09 06:42 am UTC (link)
And soon the battle shall begin.

The plot thickens...

-paganmaid

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[info]maddogs991
2006-12-09 11:26 am UTC (link)
Fabulous. Looking forward to this immensely...

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[info]lepidoctor
2006-12-09 11:54 am UTC (link)
what's the second bit of your icon say? O_O

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[info]maddogs991
2006-12-09 08:28 pm UTC (link)
Oh it's in the voice of the Muppet Chef from the Muppet Show.

So it's put the Dobby in the Cauldron..

Um gesh de BORK BORK BORK :P

I'm not sure that last bit's supposed to make any sense at all ^^

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[info]sninny04
2006-12-09 04:50 pm UTC (link)
Oh
My
God.

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[info]cheezeboi
2007-02-23 05:46 am UTC (link)
ditto.

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[info]charma_10
2007-09-24 02:49 pm UTC (link)
*grumbles* really wish someone would approve my membership the community to so I can read this apparent masterpiece.

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I'm confused...
[info]lysx
2008-03-07 02:54 am UTC (link)
These are all Previews...
where's the story itself?
Not meaning to sound rude, I've read the previews and watched the trailers, it sounds and looks amazing, I want to read the whole story. Start to Finish...

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